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Typo logged at ('game/script.rpy', 472): They are are sorely mistaken if they believe that they can go wherever they please and build those grotesque structures. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/script.rpy', 472): double are ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/script.rpy', 524): Once, when I played it near my home, a noble stag and an elegant doe both approached me, equally tranfixed by the melody. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/script.rpy', 524): on transfixed ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 37): I stride contently along the road, taking in the fresh dewy air and sights of villages I have scarecely seen. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 37): scarcely ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 44): When we finally pass through the town's gate and arrive Luguvalium’s market, I immediately peel away from Delyth’s side. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 44): arrive at? ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 98): by giving? ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 406): I picture the fate that wil befall the other men and count myself lucky that this is the way I am being told to leave. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 406): 'will' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 538): Thee new dress slips on easily. I fasten the waist-chain, but I cannot reach the lacing on the back. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 596): When he reaches the top, a single finger slips underneath the fabric of my dress and brushes across my nape. There, he tucks away the final ends of the the strings. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 596): double on 'the the' ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 675): maybe only a 'suggestion'..? ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 693): It a very hot day, I am sure that any left over from the cheese-making process will become spoiled by now. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 693): It is ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 2.rpy', 851): 'turns' but tbh since it's isidorus i could care less ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 3.rpy', 95): A dozen men flood in to surround me Though they point weapons, their eyes are tinged with fear. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 3.rpy', 95): missing a dot '.' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 3.rpy', 456): If you keep up the story of the being our witch, we will ease your wanderlust. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 4.rpy', 213): Each of the soliders freeze in place. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 318): I wordlessly pluck another arrow from the ground and assume the firing postion. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 318): 'position ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 366): maybe without space for a noun of keep a 'lookout' ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 368): find myself out 'of arrows'; im guessing was accidental incomplete? ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 368): I reach for another arrow, but find myself out for the dozenth time that day. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 382): I feel a tug on my hair, and and look towards the direction of the movement. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 382): double 'and' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 417): Kveldulf’s glances my way, his eyes flashing with the rest of the sun’s light. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 417): the use of 'Kveldulf's' glances ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 462): Kveldulf inhales slowly, then releases his breath thrugh clenched teeth. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 462): 'through' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 536): I nod and thank Finn for for the information as I bid him good night. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 536): double 'for' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 161): Am unpleasant tightness rises in my stomach at the idea of venturing out into the dark woods. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 161): 'An' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 214): When we get close enough to where I can make out the indidivual bricks in the wall, the sound of a horn rips through the quiet. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 214): 'individual' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 361): I remind myself that this is is where Esquilinius' allegiance lies. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 361): double 'is' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 395): I slip backwards, the saddle suddenly in front of me mow. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 8.rpy', 395): 'now' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 9.rpy', 122): Kveldulf doesn not waste a moment in retaliating. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 9.rpy', 122): 'does not' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 9 battles.rpy', 325): He drags his hand across his mouth it as he sits upright, smearing the blood. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 9 battles.rpy', 561): I run towards the Kveldulf's voice, tears burning in my eyes. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 9 battles.rpy', 561): unneeded 'the' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 144): Delyth lies her eyes upon Finn. An undreadable expression falls on her features. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 144): 'unreadable' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 107): My heart drops. I do not see Esquilinius anywhere. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 173): My heart drops. I do not see Esquilinius anywhere. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 173): this same line repeated, i think it was supposed to be something along 'I look around for Esquilinius' like in others' route. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 570): I am tacken aback when Finn responds. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 570): 'taken' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 656): Though he fought valiantly to resist it it in favor of clinging to battle, the fog carried him over with the rest. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 656): double 'it' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 757): As those who oppose you you grow weaker, you will grow stronger. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 757): double 'you' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 477): But I no longer regret having been sent here. I will take responsibiility for them and right their wrongs. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 477): 'responsibility' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 539): Esqulinius inhales sharply, his entire body tensing as he startles. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 539): 'Esquilinius' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 595): I...cannot understand how killing could come as as naturally as breathing. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 595): double 'as' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 278): Nerva Cantius, I will kill you! I swear to Mithras I will snuff our your worthless life! ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 278): snuff 'out' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 13.rpy', 101): All I can do is to keep from crying look up at Esquilinius’ stoic face. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 573): Finn chickles, a clear sound that reminds me of the tinkle of a bell. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 598): I remove my sling from my pouch and position the stone in the middle of the pouch. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 598): middle of sling? ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 5.rpy', 848): They sky very suddenly turns a lifeless grey. ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 6.rpy', 236): I absentmindedly run mt fingers through Euphrates’ pale mane. It trails down his neck, with one side trimmed much shorter than the other. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 6.rpy', 236): 'my' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 6.rpy', 321): Some of those in my sphere resented both mine and my father's infleunces. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 6.rpy', 321): 'influences' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 898): I cannot claim to have witnessed what you and Finn have gone throuugh… ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 898): 'through' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1104): His breaths come in rugged gasps. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1104): 'ragged' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1116): I was bashined from my homeland... for being a monster... ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1116): 'banished' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 78): No! Don’t take my soul just yet! ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 78): the 'Soldier' label ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 9.rpy', 364): I pull my lips away. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 9.rpy', 364): the you know, name label still there for the action description ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 639): Somehow, everything shifts. I get the same disoriented sensation I felt with the fog rolled in. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 10.rpy', 639): with using 'when' i think ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 802): My face burns as he gazes at me hopefully, his lips curved into a mischevious smile. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 11.rpy', 802): 'mischievous' ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1460): 'I can feel my heartbeat in the top of my head'? ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1657): Finn rushes towards me, taking the ends of my freshly-cut hair between his fingers and stoking my cheek. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1657): 'stroking' ---------------------------- Typo logged at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1665): I grip FInn tightly, my body feeling icy with fear. ---------------------------- Note created at ('game/chapter 12.rpy', 1665): 'Finn' one letter typo ----------------------------